tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post4914405007247050163..comments2023-08-15T22:33:25.911+10:00Comments on Sari Webb: Enchanted by Words: More bombs goodSari Webbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14157780034728554529noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-61519269320526662742014-06-18T03:17:25.679+10:002014-06-18T03:17:25.679+10:00Hi I'm looking for your contact info for a boo...Hi I'm looking for your contact info for a bookreview/post?<br />Can you email me at EdenLiterary at gmail dot com<br />Deirdrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13725424353311165246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-2721714316177281612013-01-02T12:33:49.120+11:002013-01-02T12:33:49.120+11:00Where aaaaaaaaaaare you Sari?Where aaaaaaaaaaare you Sari?Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-45990332881589815472012-07-28T12:05:24.139+10:002012-07-28T12:05:24.139+10:00I LOVE that snippet you posted. Fan-freaking-tasti...I LOVE that snippet you posted. Fan-freaking-tastic. I need to employ plot bombs when I'm having an "off" day. You know when I'm just not inspired. A plot bomb might be just what I need. Thanks for the reminder. And I want that Oreo cookie. Yum.KM Nallehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06714392426676743868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-64923458165679233762012-07-23T17:48:20.749+10:002012-07-23T17:48:20.749+10:00You know what? I just might have to try this with ...You know what? I just might have to try this with my next WiP. Given the setting, the unexpected would work quite well. Thanks for the thought! :)David P. Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17259276981865439853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-4975242202563163742012-07-07T12:28:33.875+10:002012-07-07T12:28:33.875+10:00I've heard of this method, but, for some reaso...I've heard of this method, but, for some reason, this post has really helped me to actually "get" it! Perhaps your excitement is contagious. Now I want to go through my first seven chapters again and do this even though I realllly need to get this other critique done and not fall any farther behind on blogs than I already am with my limited computer time. But I don't care! I'm excited!Brooke R. Bussehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17147444223968856153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-21480849478884817662012-07-06T22:30:50.588+10:002012-07-06T22:30:50.588+10:00Heh! Having got them into the desert though, it wa...Heh! Having got them into the desert though, it was a difficult job getting them out again!<br /><br />If I ever finish revision, you're welcome to read it :)Pruehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01666246741812501876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-58941204233792929322012-07-06T09:32:21.610+10:002012-07-06T09:32:21.610+10:00Congratulations on your writing progress!Congratulations on your writing progress!Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-41283338743746998032012-07-06T09:20:09.127+10:002012-07-06T09:20:09.127+10:00Wow, sounds like an interesting story you've g...Wow, sounds like an interesting story you've got there, Prue. Lost in the Sahara on a camel with badies firing shots! Fun :)Sari Webbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14157780034728554529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-39427325017262525272012-07-06T09:19:20.079+10:002012-07-06T09:19:20.079+10:00That bug is a very good bug. We need to put him in...That bug is a very good bug. We need to put him in a bug breeding farm so we have lots more!Sari Webbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14157780034728554529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-87735958954181933162012-07-06T09:18:30.760+10:002012-07-06T09:18:30.760+10:00Higher stakes and bigger obsticles. And the MC def...Higher stakes and bigger obsticles. And the MC definitely didn't get off lightly. I'm slowly teaching myself to punish my characters. ;)Sari Webbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14157780034728554529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-31811865228338097062012-07-06T08:22:55.542+10:002012-07-06T08:22:55.542+10:00Woohoo! The second version sounds so much more int...Woohoo! The second version sounds so much more interesting :D<br />Good for you!<br /><br />I did the same thing. Two characters go off on a camel. Along come the baddies who ask the heroine and sidekick questions. When they have no answers the baddies just drive off and the heroine and sidekick go on their way.<br /><br />New version: Baddies shoot at heroine and sidekick (and miss - the heroine has been shot before so I thought that was ok). Camel races off into the desert and then they are lost, at night, with no landmarks, no compass and the Sahara to wander around in!<br />Yes. That made it all a bit more challenging :DPruehttp://prudencewombat.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-38572006871070187862012-07-06T05:18:25.882+10:002012-07-06T05:18:25.882+10:00Whoo, go you! I love those moments where the whole...Whoo, go you! I love those moments where the whole "what if this happened instead?" bug creeps into writing and makes everything eight times better. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2027764684411261787.post-54501889087543460362012-07-05T20:41:45.151+10:002012-07-05T20:41:45.151+10:00Congratulations! What were the major differences b...Congratulations! What were the major differences between scene A and B?LM Prestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624508396760965680noreply@blogger.com